Sunday, June 27, 2010

Sorry I Didn't Post

Sorry I didn't post yesterday! I was very busy! I had two sleepovers and I was outside all day!
Today I went to Chrissy Field in San Francisco. It was so cold but, I still went in the water. I was making a fort with my brother and two friends, Emily and Max. The fort was for hermit crabs.

Continuing on the adjectives...
Writing Tip: Don't use boring adjectives.
Example- nice, white, cool, kind, fun, etc.
They are so boring and even though they describe something, they're not that descriptive.
I hope you liked that one,
Malia

1 comment:

  1. Don't let your social schedule get in the way of your blogging!

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